Look for Takeshi's profile here, it's moved.

These still make me laugh :3

let's get our game on:



I was saving this for Halloween but CLOSE ENOUGH, I'm dying to play it and I have some things to take off my mind, so perfect distraction. I guess, warning for creepy factor? I've purposefully kept myself as in the dark about this game as I possibly could, the only info I looked at was the art inspirations, one of which was Geiger so I know it's going to be at least a little creepy to look at lol

ANYWHO:

>>>http://www.twitch.tv/penumbraex<<<

(I might also switch games at some point or do some art, lord knows lol I just sort of roll with it in my last minute streams)

Caw is officially deceased and inactive. He was killed by one of Iugulare's Rock Hounds






I wanted to make Caw!

His biography is pretty much the shortstory Banished, and I think I'd have a lot of fun playing as him. He has a much different personality than Quad, Pent, Trunks, ect.

Picto!

I need help deciding on a set for him, too. He is 'The Islander', so an island/sea-ish look would be cool (I don't really want the orca set even though that would be perfect for him). Any suggestions would be cool.

Set -

I feel bad for making another deer, but then again I think he would be fun to play as.

Also



His theme song

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So I'm wondering if anybody particularly wants to meet one of my deer in-Forest?

I know some people that I'm sure my deer would get along with, and even though nobody's ever made the request for them to meet up, I thought I'd just ask. c: Their circles of friends aren't very wide, lols. I might pop somebody in the forest if anybody is interested.

((Gah. Fail. Fail... Anyway, if I had to cut this poem down to two lines, it would be the first and the last ones, which were inspired by a little exchange I noticed under her bio. Originally they were the last two lines, but as a framing device...I kind of like this better.))

((Gah. Bad and short. I am apparently awful at doing gifts, who knew? You deserve better, Dannii!))

If you are here, you would either like to have your art analyzed, or would like to help people improve, yes?

Good. Let's get started.

A few ground rules:
1. If you want to bash someone, that's too bad, dunk your head in a fishbowl or something. While constructive criticism is what we're aiming for, anything that is seen to be flat-out rude will not be tolerated and this thread will be deleted after a good number of offenses.
2. If you are going to post something that is rather adult, please post a link to it instead of posting the image on the thread. I'm already responsible for plenty of lost innocence, thanks. D8 (Adult here means excessive nudity, gore, very harsh language, sexual themes, etc)
3. When critiquing a specific piece of art, please say who it's directed at. If it isn't the one directly above your post, it can get confusing!

How to post your art (more or less)
"-insert pic here-
This took about 2 hours in Photoshop 7. It's Oz and Desanm, humanized, messing around on the beach. To help with the skeletons I used this and this as references. Redlines are wanted, thanks!"

What constitutes a good critique?
[=10]"@Fledermaus:

I love the colors you used! They're very vibrant and the fact that you used different tones for the shading adds a lot of dimension to it. However, the composition is a bit unbalanced - everything major is in the bottom right corner of the picture, and there's not a lot on the left. While this sometimes works, it makes the canvas pretty empty here. Maybe you should try adding another subject?