Rubies in the Pond [Discontinued]

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NOTICE:: Although I am taking my leave from the TEFc, I will be leaving this here.



All illustrations in my fanfiction are done by the fabulous Ephra.

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Prologue: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter One - Discovery: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Two - Crying Idols: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Three - Following Sorrow: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Four - All in a Night's Work: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Five - A Second Night's Work: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Six - The Heart of Me: Click!- Illustrated

Chapter Seven - The Morning After: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Eight - Her Choice: Click!

Chapter Nine - Found: Click!

Chapter Ten - Chasing Dreams: Click!

Chapter Eleven - Rubies in the Pond: Click!


Chapter Twelve - Empathy Resonance:Click!


Chapter Thirteen - Link (Being Revised!)

- Zergarikiaka

Chapter Fourteen - Reunion (Planning Characters)

- Queze
- Yorres
- ???

Chapter Fifteen - Resolve(Planning Characters)

- Laruna
- Sorrel
- Spyrre
- R
- Tails
- ???

Ending Conclusion

*Needs characters.

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::NOTE::

I will be spreading out the rest of the characters in the various chapters, except for those whom are allocated special placements.

As you can see, I've been adding more chapter titles of what's to come. My writer's block finally gave way and I've figured a nice little plot to carry the story on with. The story will probably end at about fiften chapters max, and then I'll post this story onto a different website where people can read it. I have also added a conclusion too, since the story wouldn't end right if I left it at the last chapter

Slots are open for all. One character per player so far until I feel it's necessary to add alts. Characters maked like this are ones that have been accepted and given a place in the story.

1. Kaoori
2. Sorrel
3. Tails
4. Spyrre
5. Zergarikiaka
6. Queze
7. R
8. brd
9. Faunet
10. Umay
11. Yorres
12. Leeon
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Lyeekha's picture

Wow, you have it all planned

Wow, you have it all planned out! Incredible! Shocked Laughing out loud

My english teachers hate me because I cant plan. if I plan, I do shiz. If I just start writing, I get so many ideas that it turns out too long. Sticking out tongue
..which is why I haven't started a fanfic!
Verdalas's picture

I'm like that. xD For one

I'm like that. xD For one part of a story I'll have tons of ideas, but for the next part I won't have a clue. I'm much better at quick pieces of prose, actually. Sticking out tongue
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Anzel's picture

(your link for the third

(your link for the third chapter is cut off ;p)
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Fixed it now. xP ---- Click

Fixed it now. xP
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Could Dim be in, if that's

Could Dim be in, if that's ok? c:

If not, never mind i love reading it anyway! 8D
Verdalas's picture

Dimkins shall be!

Dimkins shall be! <3
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Inuyasha1141's picture

Can Swiftkil1141 be in it

Can Swiftkil1141 be in it she is one of my fawns
Never seen eyes glowing green
howls at night giving people their worst fright and fears
Gardian and leader of the Black Bloods
I am Swiftkil

Pets name: Inuyasha
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Verdalas's picture

Uhm. I suppose, if you

Uhm. I suppose, if you provide a bio page. I'm a bit uncomfortable with using a deer with numbers in the name though, so I might have to change that within the story, if you don't have any objections?
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You can ask Fenqua, Kagome,

You can ask Fenqua, Kagome, or Skokey I guess. C:
Or you can have my secret fawn. -shifty eyes-
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I'm laaaaazy. They can ask.

I'm laaaaazy. They can ask. xD
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Inuyasha1141's picture

I foreget what's a

I foreget what's a bio?
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Never seen eyes glowing green
howls at night giving people their worst fright and fears
Gardian and leader of the Black Bloods
I am Swiftkil

Pets name: Inuyasha
Adopt your own!

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Inuyasha1141's picture

Oh

Oh NVM
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Never seen eyes glowing green
howls at night giving people their worst fright and fears
Gardian and leader of the Black Bloods
I am Swiftkil

Pets name: Inuyasha
Adopt your own!

Clicky on him to see my other pets
Verdalas's picture

You could have just edited

You could have just edited your comment. >>; And is that a NVM on being in the story or nvm on what a bio is?
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nvm on both it says my fawn

nvm on both it says my fawn is non exicistant
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Never seen eyes glowing green
howls at night giving people their worst fright and fears
Gardian and leader of the Black Bloods
I am Swiftkil

Pets name: Inuyasha
Adopt your own!

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Tabithaaa's picture

Oh, could I be in it? <33 I

Oh, could I be in it? <33
I am faaaar to lazy to write a bio... but in short....

Well, my deer has no name really (thats a bit sad now I come to think of it), but call her Tabi. Or Tabby. Or whatever xD. She is a doe, and a party animal Smiling). She has no mate, since a) She flirts with everyone and b), she is a bit of a bimbo. xD.

However, she is very kind, and hates to see deer being hurt or upset, and will stand in the way of fights. She loves fawns, and will mother them obsessivly, given half the chance c:

She hatehatehates! Seeing naked deer. It makes her feel cringy. So she will try to dress them up as soon as possible. Oh, and the rain. Frizzy fur!

So... I think thats it. ^^; You don't have to include her, it was nice in a way to write out her personality for myself anyway (while cluttering up your board xD).
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Actually, I could use a

Actually, I could use a bimbo deer somewhere in the beginning of Chapter Seven, even if it is a brief mention. Would you mind that at all? Sticking out tongue
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Anzel's picture

Anzel would be in your plot,

Anzel would be in your plot, but Anzel isn't a 'real deer' yet, it'd be a pain to write about her.

*awaits next chapter*

I just finished Dim's bio,

I just finished Dim's bio, if that helps. c:

Nomghgm moreplz *rereads and rereads*
Verdalas's picture

Well, I plan on taking a

Well, I plan on taking a break before chapter five, another short one before six, and then carrying on with seven. If you're in the forest by then, Anzel, who knows? Eye

And thankies Dimkins! =3
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Tabithaaa's picture

Haha, hooray for being a

Haha, hooray for being a bimbo! xD. Of course, I'd love that! <33

There are probably other

There are probably other people out there wanting the part of the fawn, but you could use Scorn to add some evildeerdrama to your AMAZINGLYAMAZING chapters? [He could just be nomming on some innocent fawn in the background!]
I don't mind if you don't add him, it's just a suggestion. Laughing out loud
Verdalas's picture

I'm hoping to give everyone

I'm hoping to give everyone a chance at having their character in the story, so I won't be adding more than one character per person -yet-.
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Fenqua's picture

Well, Fenqua is free to use!

Well, Fenqua is free to use! I'm not a fawn for long anymore, but you can always write her in as a fawn, I don't mind ^^

Bio: http://www.endlessforest.org/community/fenquas-biography

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Shiori's picture

I suppose Darcy isn't a very

I suppose Darcy isn't a very known deer, more like the outsider who wants to be involved but usually screws up XD But I will volenteer him anyways!
His Bio
No obligation, I understand pickiness all too well.

Oh, and I haven't commented on your chapters yet so I'll do it here, though I don't have much to add from the other "Good, great, and deer CSI pwns" opinions hehe. I really like the believability of emotion and Lieka's character. Ah, and the planning. I can't plan anything I write, which is why all my stories fail >< So kudos, aaaand...I guess that's all!

ammy would like to be in it

ammy would like to be in it if she can Smiling
EDIT heres her bio
http://endlessforest.org/community/ammys-bio

if you want to...
Verdalas's picture

Darcy would slot into the

Darcy would slot into the story quite nicely..

As for ammy, I don't think she's exactly what I'm looking for, but do you have any other deer?
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squeegie's picture

Hmmm, is it alright if I may

Hmmm, is it alright if I may be in your story? (:

My deer's bio is pretty old, now. He's changed, kind of. xD
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Which deer is that? -Lazy-

Which deer is that? -Lazy- Do you have a bio?
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His name is Squeegie. x3 I

His name is Squeegie. x3 I have a bio, but it's old and he's changed in a way.
Verdalas's picture

No good telling me he's

No good telling me he's changed. xD You better update it and lemme have a lookie. =P
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nah i didnt actually think

Smiling nah i didnt actually think Ammy would fit. shes too much of a scardy cat really *note to self next deer must be brave* Eye
Taiko's picture

I don't know if Taiko will

I don't know if Taiko will fit in, but I'll volunteer him, too.
Here's his bio: http://www.endlessforest.org/community/taikos-biography-0
Verdalas's picture

Maybe possibly..

Maybe possibly.. *Ponderponder* I'll go over his bio more thorougly first and let you know. xP
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Pegasicorn's picture

Maybe one of mine would fit

Maybe one of mine would fit in? But thas up to you. Bio's linked in my signature anyway.

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Shiori's picture

Yay! -squeak- -does the

Yay! -squeak- -does the circle-dance-
Verdalas's picture

I know Magnet pretty well,

I know Magnet pretty well, but using Scape could be interesting. I'll think about it.

And you're welcome Darcykins. xD
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quadraptor's picture

You can use Quad if you'd

You can use Quad if you'd like.

http://www.endlessforest.org/community/quads-biography

He's generally very happy and social in the Forest, where he dances, nuzzles, ect., but occasionally he has a darker side where he's the opposite - observes other deer from a distance, runs off when they try to greet him, and sits alone. Any way you would like to express Quad is absolutely fine with me, since he tends to be both a social and anti-social deer.

He'd be the kind of deer that would be disturbed by strange events, but would try to calm others down rather than freaking out himself. He also would want to help out in any way.
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If I decided to add Quad,

If I decided to add Quad, would you want him to still be Walter & 21's adopted son?
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Of course! As long as it

Of course! Eye As long as it works and doesn't contradict anything.

Heh ^^;; I would've liked

Heh ^^;; I would've liked Rutilus to be in it.....*hasnt read all the comments thoroughly* ...Are all the spaces taken? D: ^___^;;;;;;;;;;;;; Eheh.
*puppy eyes*

-- Dannii <3
Verdalas's picture

Naughty for not reading.

Naughty for not reading. =O

I'm not too sure yet. I haven't quite re-opened the spots, but I shall certainly take Rutlius into consideration. xP
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I'm a badddd badd girl D:

I'm a badddd badd girl D: XD

^^ Thanks. Hopefully his AWESOMEEEEE and CARINGGGG nature will win you over. (Clearly, I'm being sarcastic. But in a gooodddd wayyyy. <3)

D: Rutilus felt bad for making Walter run away. But I have to admit I found it absurdly hilarious when Walter was all "OMGGGG" after Twenty One stood up for Rutilus XDDDD It made me laugh out loud. Hysterically. 8D

-- Dannii <3
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bubblywums's picture

WOO! Thanks so much for

WOO! Thanks so much for making this. I've had a hard time looking through pages of diaries just to find your story. <3
I loved having my character be included in your wonderful story, so thank you for including me! I can't wait to read more.
Laruna's picture

I'd love it if you could fit

I'd love it if you could fit Laruna in there. But I don't know what you're looking for in your story... Laruna's getting pretty old (well old for me--he'll be a year in October), but I don't think he's that familiar of a stag.

I've been meaning to write a long biography about him... I'll write a little bit up in case you want to consider him. Since he's my oldest deer, I'm starting to play him that way. I'd say if he's any of the familiar collective unconscious roles/heroes, it would be "the sage." He's calm, helpful, enigmatic. He's patient with magic (casting). I can't really explain why he gets irritated sometimes, but he definitely has that side of him. He doesn't like to back down from mean deer, especially when they're bothering someone. He's chased deer off before (lol I remember him chasing choir-boy fawns through the Forest), but he'd rather stand his ground until they leave.
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I don't suppose there's room

I don't suppose there's room for Seed in there, is there?
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[pops in] :B I hope there's

[pops in]
:B I hope there's no more room when I ask for Her to be even slightly mentioned, because if there were she would totally ruin your story and WE DON'T WANT THAT so I'm just going to keep reading yay. <3

ZOMGGLE! Verdalas, I LOVES

ZOMGGLE! Verdalas, I LOVES YOU D: XDD You added Rutilus in :3 <33 THankyou ^^ ....=D Is it okay if I add you in to the story I'm writing? It's pretty crappy but I wants Walter in it 83

-- Dannii <3
Verdalas's picture

Sure! I'll be trying to add

Sure! I'll be trying to add everyone I can, since I would really love to have all my friends included.
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Wherever you put Vipin is

Wherever you put Vipin is fine with me. :3
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I'd love to be a part of

I'd love to be a part of your story! It's really well-done. ^^
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