Rubies in the Pond [Discontinued]

June 14, 2008 - 3:28pm — Verdalas

Rubies in the Pond

NOTICE:: Although I am taking my leave from the TEFc, I will be leaving this here.

All illustrations in my fanfiction are done by the fabulous Ephra.

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Prologue: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter One - Discovery: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Two - Crying Idols: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Three - Following Sorrow: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Four - All in a Night's Work: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Five - A Second Night's Work: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Six - The Heart of Me: Click!- Illustrated

Chapter Seven - The Morning After: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Eight - Her Choice: Click!

Chapter Nine - Found: Click!

Chapter Ten - Chasing Dreams: Click!

Chapter Eleven - Rubies in the Pond: Click!

Chapter Twelve - Empathy Resonance:Click!

Chapter Thirteen - Link (Being Revised!)

- Zergarikiaka

Chapter Fourteen - Reunion (Planning Characters)

- Queze
- Yorres
- ???

Chapter Fifteen - Resolve(Planning Characters)

- Laruna
- Sorrel
- Spyrre
- R
- Tails
- ???

Ending Conclusion

*Needs characters.

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::NOTE::

I will be spreading out the rest of the characters in the various chapters, except for those whom are allocated special placements.

As you can see, I've been adding more chapter titles of what's to come. My writer's block finally gave way and I've figured a nice little plot to carry the story on with. The story will probably end at about fiften chapters max, and then I'll post this story onto a different website where people can read it. I have also added a conclusion too, since the story wouldn't end right if I left it at the last chapter

Slots are open for all. One character per player so far until I feel it's necessary to add alts. Characters maked like ~~this~~ are ones that have been accepted and given a place in the story.

~~1. Kaoori~~
~~2. Sorrel~~
~~3. Tails~~
~~4. Spyrre~~
~~5. Zergarikiaka~~
~~6. Queze~~
~~7. R~~
8. brd
9. Faunet
10. Umay
~~11. Yorres~~
12. Leeon
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January 12, 2009 - 7:57pm — Lyeekha

Hey, just a note, you know I

Hey, just a note, you know I have a frankly stupid amount of deer, so if it turns out you have gaps that for some reason you can't get people to fill (unlikely I know

), I probably have a deer of any personality ya want.

Keep up the good work! 8D

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January 12, 2009 - 9:06pm — Verdalas

Thanks Lieka! In response to

Thanks Lieka!

In response to you, Flyra, I just need stags in general, provided they aren't evil and sociable enough to be around others.

January 12, 2009 - 11:31pm — Pegasicorn

I have more deer than I did

I have more deer than I did before, so if any of them work, you can add them in. =] The majority are stags, too. XD

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The Dragonfly Deer's Biography

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January 12, 2009 - 11:44pm — Flyra

Huh, kay... then maybe

Huh, kay... then maybe Khaki? He's a very friendly one, but when there is something that puts his peace in risk he can get very angry and resolutely, so maybe he would be good for the story? ^^
Thanks very much in advance! <3

Lightcreator

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January 13, 2009 - 6:18pm — Verycrazygirl

<< >> How about a minor

<<
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How about a minor mention of that black and white doe that keeps taunting Walter? ;P

I'm sure you know who I'm talking about~ x3

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January 13, 2009 - 10:38pm — Ephra

Whooah, I'm feeling so

Whooah, I'm feeling so nostalgic now.

I will make illustrations soon.

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January 23, 2009 - 1:10am — Emiva

If you need people's second

If you need people's second deer, I have Mazie and Lenore you could choose from if you wanted- there bios can be found in the link below, but mainly mazie is fun-filled and likes to salsa and Lenore is a widow who is in love with Luthis (squeegie's deer) x3

BIOGRAPHIES AND UPDATES

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January 23, 2009 - 12:17pm — Verdalas

At the moment I'm focusing

At the moment I'm focusing on adding stags. But I'll add Lenore to the list.

January 24, 2009 - 2:40am — fayne

uuuuuh if you have open

uuuuuh if you have open slots any of my second deer are open. |D -brick'd-
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Bios

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Forest FAQ

February 3, 2009 - 12:21am — Moosehoof

OHH! Add Kuzco! He has the

OHH! Add Kuzco! He has the anilope antlers, real deer mask and real deer pelt!

he is a teen deer, until he gets his big anlters!

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February 20, 2009 - 4:42am — Camy

My stag, Trident, is old

My stag, Trident, is old as...I don't know how old but he's old XD So, if you wish to use him, that's fine by me~ :3

I have his bio in my diary which is located here. Also, you inspire me to write Trident's life story.

February 22, 2009 - 11:26am — OneDeer

Ahhhhhh, Verdalas! I just

Ahhhhhh, Verdalas! I just caught up on the story, it's awesome, and with each chapter you're getting better!

Ohman though, do you think you could use Obelisk or Soap-Mote somewhere? That would be so awesome *mouthfoam* Aha, I'll be rolling around with joy and acting childish. <3
If you want to there's a link in my sig to their little descriptions.

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March 11, 2009 - 2:02am — Verdalas

Wow, thanks Camy. I didn't

Wow, thanks Camy. I didn't know my lame skills were possible of inspiring someone! ^_^

Aaand thankyou, TwoEars.

I'll see if I can fit Obelisk in somewhere.

March 11, 2009 - 3:56am — Kaoori

D'oh. I'm late to the

D'oh. I'm late to the bandwagon. But awesome story!
If for whatever reason you need a doe later on, feel free to use Kaoori.

I'd be honored.
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I'm a little wolf inside a girl.

Lightbringer-apprentice to Yorres

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March 14, 2009 - 10:02am — OneDeer

I am very happy you are

I am very happy you are looking at putting Obelisk in the story! Thank you!

*lugs one over from egypt* Haha, not that kind of course.

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| Endless Encyclopedia | TEF Art Portfolio | Deer Biographies |

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May 8, 2009 - 3:40pm — Terabetha

D: HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS

D: HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS BEFORE!

!
omg Verdy this story is rainbow shades of EPIC! Gah, more :B lol

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June 12, 2009 - 4:27pm — Kinsmate

Holly crap I just spent an

Holly crap I just spent an hour reading every chapter.... Holly crap. More. Holly crap.
Is there any chance you need another chara?

Some day I'll die and run up to satin and yell, "I'M YOUR PROBLEM NOW!"

June 19, 2009 - 12:51pm — Verdalas

Teehee. Mostly because

Teehee. Mostly because people are busy with updates that the new chaptes are flushed down into oblivion. Plus I haven't released a new chapter recently. I'm waiting until I'm totally finished with school and back in a writing mood.

I'm not sure about needing new characters, but I can always replace ones that belong to people who aren't here anymore.
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June 19, 2009 - 2:04pm — Terabetha

You are still welcome to use

You are still welcome to use any of my characters, but if you'd like to give the slot to someone more active I wouldn't mind, I'll read either way lol

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June 19, 2009 - 7:43pm — fayne

I'm still here. XD If you're

I'm still here. XD If you're planning on using me.
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Forest FAQ

June 19, 2009 - 8:00pm — Flyra

leaves a comment Khaki is

*leaves a comment* Khaki is still honored that he will appear in your epic story <3

Lightcreator

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June 20, 2009 - 3:16pm — Emiva

This should seriously

This should seriously consider being published ^^;

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Hugs and kisses,

Emiva <3

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June 21, 2009 - 12:09pm — Lyeekha

I am still here of course,

I am still here of course, and would like to second the above 'specially cos I'm printing it off for me anyway. c:

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July 8, 2009 - 9:14pm — Qualis

This story of yours is going

^{This story of yours is going along really well!}

July 8, 2009 - 9:40pm — Verycrazygirl

Yeah, now get off WoW and

Yeah, now get off WoW and make some more chapters dernit!

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Meet Virgil

Meet The Crew

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September 28, 2010 - 11:24pm — Verdalas

I have actually been thinking

I have actually been thinking of maybe writing TEF novels as a hobby and publishing them with the funds to help ToT. Of course that'd be a long way away and I'm just a university student right now, but there's always dreams!

EDIT: Shameless bump. Should I get onto writing the remainder at last?

September 28, 2010 - 11:36pm — SarieBearie

I've always adored this

I've always adored this story. YES.

September 28, 2010 - 11:41pm — Lyeekha

Ohmygoodness this story is

Ohmygoodness this story is (potentially) still going.

YES.

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September 28, 2010 - 11:43pm — Verdalas

I can't believe it's two

I can't believe it's two years since I started this story stuff.. xD

Furthermore I can't believe people want me to finish it! There's been a lot of players come and go though, so I think I might have to get new characters on the case.

September 29, 2010 - 1:03am — Pegasicorn

O_O! This might get

O_O! This might get continued, you say? 8D

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September 29, 2010 - 1:05am — Verdalas

@Pega: With a few changes, I

@Pega:
With a few changes, I can see it being finished.. But a lot has changed in-Forest since I started it. Hence why I'm going to have to revamp the character list and work on potential other deer I can stick in. D:

September 29, 2010 - 1:10am — Pegasicorn

I can understand there being

I can understand there being changes to it. Some characters might've even changed over time, too. |D;

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September 29, 2010 - 1:21am — Iaurdagnire

What in the shi- Most of

What in the shi-

Most of this was written before I existed here, but now it's been brought to my attention I will read every one; you're an amazing writer, if I haven't said that before.

September 29, 2010 - 1:34am — Verdalas

Well I hope it's a delight to

Well I hope it's a delight to read Dag. ^_^ I really don't want people who weren't around to dislike this story just because they weren't about to witness me writing it originally. >_>

September 29, 2010 - 2:14am — Freyja

Are you still accepting

Are you still accepting characters for this o:?

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September 29, 2010 - 2:18am — Verdalas

Yep. I just opened requests

Yep. I just opened requests for characters, so I have slots left.

September 29, 2010 - 2:37am — Freyja

Neat~ Well, she's getting a

Neat~ Well, she's getting a redesign, but if you want a good/neutral character then I have Sorrel. I also have Totlecatl who's a definite villain. Links in my sig!

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September 29, 2010 - 2:44am — Verdalas

Thanks! I don't think I'll be

Thanks! I don't think I'll be in need of any bad characters, but having some more good-natured deer would certainly help. So for now I shall add Sorrel to the list. Thankyou!

September 29, 2010 - 3:01am — Kittyo8

These are amazing, Verdalas!

These are amazing, Verdalas!

will go back to reading nao

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September 29, 2010 - 3:09am — Verdalas

Aw, thankyou. But they're

Aw, thankyou. But they're nothing special. There are more talented writers out there. :3

September 29, 2010 - 3:23am — quadraptor

Any of my deer you need, feel

Any of my deer you need, feel free to use them. For this I might suggest Blixt (the luchador masked deer), who is a serious and semi-aggressive stag. And of course if you need Quad for anything, by all means toss him in.

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September 29, 2010 - 4:17am — Verdalas

I'll probably have Quad

I'll probably have Quad making another appearance at the end. :3

September 29, 2010 - 5:49am — Serrod

Woah, these are really good!

Woah, these are really good! I'd offer up one of my two characters, but they're both v&g so they would be pretty bleh.

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September 29, 2010 - 6:00am — Zergarikiaka

You can choose any of mine

You can choose any of mine that you feel are suitable. <3

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September 29, 2010 - 6:15am — trigger_mortis

Though he doesn't yet have

Though he doesn't yet have much in terms of dynamics, you can use Tails if you feel the need.

These are all so fabulous! ^^

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September 29, 2010 - 6:17am — rnr

The urge to offer up R is

The urge to offer up R is almost painful. xD But his lack of character development makes me hold back.

I am truly enjoying what I have read so far. You are a talented writer.

September 29, 2010 - 6:18am — Verdalas

Thanks you two. I shall take

Thanks you two. I shall take a look in the morning. For now I am off to bed. 'Tis 5:20am!

September 29, 2010 - 7:57am — lemon

ohgodyes. ;____;

ohgodyes. ;____; <3

You know you can always use Lemon again, though she has changed quite a lot since her last appearance in the story, and probably wouldn't fit in anywhere at all. Just know that you're still always free to use her if you'd like! c:

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September 29, 2010 - 10:34am — Verycrazygirl

YES.

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September 29, 2010 - 11:42am — Spyrre

You´re a wonderful writer.

You´re a wonderful writer. <3 How have I missed this thing?
*track*

Oh, and you´re free to use my deer for the story if you need her, but of course you don´t have to.
*runs to read rest of the chapters*

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The Endless Forest

Rubies in the Pond [Discontinued]