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Things you have never seen, or never will. (Jupiter Story)

The fawn awoke, her eyes fluttering open like a butterfly's millifiori wings.

The flower patch lay spread before her, a million flowers like a million stars coursed along the ground. As if under a drought of poppy, the fawn awoke so slowly that minutes seemed like hours. Her ears were the last to awake, sharply trouncing her with bouts of sound. It did not feel good. Jupiter pressed her ears to her skull to drown out the sound, but it did not help any. Her hearing was too acute, it seemed. And... well, Jupiter's eyes would not wake up all the way. She no longer could see the very edge of her flower patch.

The very tiny edges of her vision would not un-blur. Rubbing did not help, blinking did not help. The fawn was scared. Something was so wrong, so so wrong. The fawn daintily crept to her hooves, making her way to the Crying Idol. The water's cold mist greeted her harshly, soaking her fur til it clung to her sides.

Jupiter still made her way under the rushing tears. Her hooves dug in to the mud, body trembled beneath the onslaught of water. It soaked and chilled her to the bone, but she would not get out, not until her eyes and body were clean. Her head tilted back, breath held hitched in her throat, an opened her eyes against her instincts. The icy water burned. It stung, and she sharply in-took what she hoped to be air... and coughed, swallowed more, choked.

Her body trembled as she crawled free, hitching and coughing, then collapsed in the poppies and moss next to the rumbling stone statue. She convulsed, vomiting acid and water.

Jupiter still was afraid to open her eyes. She was afraid that the blurriness would still be there. And so the fawn lay on the ground, shivering, with the stone and water roaring in her ears.



(This is a closed RP between Quad's Hex and my Jupiter only. Please respect that.)

Her Reality [a roleplay blog]

OOC|| I would like to have one deer for each of three spots; her mother, father, and a friend. She doesn't know who her family is yet, and she's wandering towards the Great Oak. If anyone is willing I'd like to sort of reenact this in the Forest. c:
Her picto is this: click.
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Back on TEF after so long. ^^

I haven't been on in maybe 6 months or more. I found another game and got hooked on it. Now it's down until the 31st. I do miss TEF anyways and got a new computer so it's all good. Smiling
I'll be on more often when I make some time. Most likely 1-2 hours a day depending. Hope to see you all in the forest! Laughing out loud
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Broken Pieces[Writing Blog]

Just bits and pieces of unfinished writing.
May contain things that could be offensive to some, please read at your own risk.

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Susurii's Travels pg 1.1

Susurii woke today like any other fawn would have, only for a short moment he couldn't remember where he was. That is until he saw his parents off to the side near the pond, remembering its where they had stopped that night. Pushing to his hooves he trotted down to meet them, taking sips from the cool water.
After a drink, and a meal of nice suple grass and twings, Susurii went about the task of finding a new friend to play with. Though at first it seemed the forest was void of anything alive, or at least awake, the fawn was greeted by a familure site. The FawnPiper, once again the black and white pelted deer had found his way into the young bucks path. A joyful bay escaped Susurii as he dashed up to the 'Piper' and smiled, greeting him with a gently nudge and a bow.
As expected, the piper took him on another playful adventure, and even showed him a magic filled pond. At first Susurii was frightened, as the Piper stepped through and lost his coat colors and mask, even his horns reverted to normal. Tilting his head, he was reasured and shown the joy in the pool. Each taking turns drinking, and becoming some other being for a short time. Both even took the time to antaginize a sleeping deer.
With a sad goodbye, Susurii bowed to the kind deer and quickly sprinted home before his mother and father could worry about his absense. Little did the young deer know, his father was already looking for him, leaving his mother at the pond alone when he returned....
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"When she loved me..." ~ Thich's History

[center]For many nights, Thich has a reoccuring dream. He does not understand this dream, and often forgets it when he wakes up. The snake plush shrugs it off as nothing and continues on his way as a living, breathing snake in the Endless Forest.

Little does he know...this dream is about him...when he was a little girl's favorite stuffed animal, before he ever lived in the Endless Forest.

The dream is always fuzzy, and many details have been lost to amnesia, but the dream shows the same images again and again...

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Biography Ode

Went to school
Attended college
Married.
Had babies, two
Divorced.
After 28 years
Soap Opera story
Typical.
Hospitalization
Career loss
Put out to pasture.
Refuse to go quietly
Started business
Writing
Need job
Please hire.
SEO Writing
Children's Book
Novel
Career found
Life abundantly again
Grateful


(thought I had better do that here rather than send out Smiling )
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And so the end begins - Final

Hey everyone, I'm really sorry but I no longer have the time or energy to go and code all of the rest of the story T_T (Time is too short)

Anyway, I would like to at least like to let those of you who care know what it is that happens to the end of the story written by firedance and myself.

firedance also wanted to include a message, so it is down below the summary.


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From where it was left off, Des, disguised as Boris, and Kita make their way to try to find Night and Asaroth. Asaroth keeps Boris away while Night tries to warn her friend of the danger that this false Boris has put her in. Kita however, refuses to listen and so Night and Asaroth are forced to withdraw for the time.

During one evening when a heavy rainstorm hits, Kita and Des take shelter below one of the willows, and spend the night together.

Des is gripped by guilt the next day and leaves Kita to think of what has happened, and what will come. While gouging his antlers into trees Asaroth and Night confront the beast. Asaroth took his advantage and began to strike and spear Des with his antlers.

Des happens to break out and, in an effort, shoved past Asaroth and struck Night, wounding her badly. Asaroth's fury flared and he turned demon, forcing Des to turn back and defend himself.

The two stags faught long and hard, but in the end Asaroth drove Des down and finished the beast off.

Kita had seen the fight, but she didn't understand, Boris would never have attacked Night, or Asaroth. But the more she watched, the more she realized that Night was right, that was not Boris, it was Des. The spell on her broke and she could see him for what he was.

Broken hearted she turned, fleeing into the forest.

After killing Des, Asaroth quickly collected up Night, calling for his children, Sariel and Lilith. Bringing them all with him he opened the portal and brought them back through it to his homeland away from the forest.

Hi! i need help!

Eye I`m new here and i want to know how to change your characters apperance. THanks!
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