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Seed's Poetry Corner: Star Flakes

The title comes from Sage's comment on the snow, after we ran around in it for a while last night. My thanks. I hope you all enjoy.

Star Flakes

Against the blackness of the woods
the fading blue midnight of the horizon
the wafting snowflakes are stars:
And so the deer, running in the night
is a burning supergiant, a short-lived
firework supernova, a crimson figure
for the stars to tumble
onto as she rushes to meet them
and fade into oblivion,
leaving a chill scent
of comets in her fur.


((I'm doing homework, so I'll link this to the index later.))
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Jupiter's Loss (Full Story)

[center]There is more strength in you than you realize.

important plot update

'Disappearance'

I've pretty much decided that I'm no longer going to be...writing it the way I was going to. I've never been any good at writing chaptered stories, really, so it wasn't exactly a good idea to start with. Taliene's been gone for more than two months now and I've written what...three pieces for the whole thing? The only one that is still accurate and hasn't been taken down is this one, which is pretty much just Rutilus and Jared figuring out that their sister's gone missing.

It'd be great if I could write the whole thing out, but I really don't have the muse or the patience for it. There's a character to be introduced that I've been dying to play for months now, and then a future character whose arrival also needs to be explained. This whole plot would probably involve me having to explain not only the background of Taliene, Rutilus and possibly Jared, but also the background of their parents and I honestly don't think I can do all of that in story form.

I don't know if it's even worth posting a whole bunch of stuff to try and explain all of this because honestly I haven't been involved with TEF lately and dfksjdhfjsfh raugh. I wanted the whole thing to be a surprise and shit and everyone would be all 'SKFLJH TWIST!' but eh.

I think I'm just going to post an explanation or something I don't know. /suicide

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She Knows. (Jupiter's Loss)

Jupiter knows, Aureia told her last night in a dream... warned her that her transformation would hurt.


The fog would come, clouding her vision, followed by the pain and ache to collapse. She would, and she would not know. Fever would take her, body boiling and wishing to expand. It would, causing her entire body agony. Like the Loup Garou, the fawn would change shape in a mess of tearing skin and stitching muscle. Her body, now screaming out in pain, would crack like a lightning-struck tree.

Her scent would bloom, earthy and floral, as convulsions ripped through her in electric currents. She would not be able to see the world through the blur.

The pain and stress of the transformation from fawn to young adult would be too much. This would be it. She would not be able to see the world as others did.

It was in this dream that Jupiter was given the gift of full-sight for the last few days of her fawnhood. The babe declined. She did not want to lose her practice. Aureia smiled, saying that she would still be rewarded for losing her sight to gain the other.

Five ever-blooming Daisies would be waiting for her, though Auriea did not tell her that.



((Just getting some thoughts out on Jupiter's plot. This is not quite eloquent enough to portray what she is going through, but it will work for now.))

weird stuff in TEF

ive seen this weird thing yesterday in TEF it was two deers walking on water and dancing on it i was whoa i wanna do that but i just could not and i thought back to youtube it was about the deermuda by the way its not real i tried it for REAL and nothing happed so i couldn't go walking on water and have fun.plus i saw a deer sitting in mid air. Shocked Puzzled

The longest dance line in TEF! :)

One day i was walking through the forest and saw like i donno 15 deers/fawns dancing i was like whoa and ran up to the line.I joined in i was kinda fun then i sat down and u know what...they ALL sat down to
.That day i thought my deer was popular...Smiling

Name my deer!

Hi,i was wondering what should i call my deer..its a female i picked three random names: Talia Cassie Angel ..what name should i pick by the way i was bored so i thought of writing this..yea it may sound silly but i dont really care ! anyway pick a name the one with most votes win ty! Smiling

How do i find my pictures i taken?

umm..i have been taking tons of pics and i really want to see them but i dont know where to get them Sad
i would really like it if some one tells me cuz i think i'll love the pics so please HELP!

Fawn Title

A gift from mother nature is like a little fawn... All excited and curious to learn... Within the forest the fawn will see an endless land... Filled all kinds of wonders... The forest is so wonderful...

- This was something that just came to me, I wasn't really sure of what to put on this blog. But I am glad I did.
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You can't lean on the trees here.

In a quiet world, days are capitalized and punctuated by the sound of birdsong and the constant hushing of trees as they remind you what a quiet world this is. The birds flit by on silent wings, butterflies floating on silent winds, leaves falling without a noise. Maybe, just maybe in this place you will hear the calls of the real inhabitants, the deer.

Today, today seems lucky. Today we come across a fawn in the sun.
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