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Critique Please?

July 25, 2011 - 1:08pm — Kytte

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It was raining,hard.Natali strolled over to The Pond to take a sip and admire the rain hitting the water.It was somehow peaceful to her.Then she went over to the Old Oak.She was wet and cold and needed some rest.Inside she went to the farthest corner where it was most dry and warm and sat down looking at the rain hitting everything else but not her.She curled up in a little ball and fell fast asleep.

"Good morning Natali."Natali opened her eyes.It was morning and there was no more rain.Yet there wasn't anything else either.It was all black but her and the two deer standing in front of her."Hello...um what do you guys want?"She asked her parents.She no longer thought of them as her parents,they were only her biological ones not ones that cared about her or anything about her."Well we were wondering if you were a adult yet.Looks like your still just a fawn.Hmm well goodbye then see you once you grow up!"Her biological mom said then Natali opened her eyes for real this time.

It wasn't morning yet,and it was still raining and still very cold."I wonder what they want from me...and why they want me to be an adult?It's not like they care about my birthday or anything.."She thought as she watched the dark grey clouds outside from the nice dry warmness inside the Old Oak.

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July 24th: Encounters

July 25, 2011 - 4:45am — Samorn

I encountered other deer today. They seemed intrigued by my presence near the Statues however they did little to disrupt me. Perhaps it is the calming influence of the Gods that affects them in this way. It was very much welcome. I did not wish to intrude on their prayers and they did not intrude on my thoughts. They were all very unique and courteous although I was too lost in my thoughts to notice them to some extent.

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Antics 7-20 to 23-11 [image heavy]

July 24, 2011 - 6:05pm — Pegasicorn

I wanted to clear the rest of my screenshots out before I take more today.

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Antics 7-12 to 19-11 [image heavy]

July 24, 2011 - 3:57am — Pegasicorn

Catching up with current screenshots!

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Snapshots x3

July 24, 2011 - 2:31am — Samorn

Last one for today

A lovely pair I walked by.

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Snapshots Set 2

July 23, 2011 - 11:05pm — Samorn

My identity has been compromised!

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Snapshots

July 23, 2011 - 10:20pm — Samorn

I decided to go incognito to take some shots of deer I spotted around the forest. Not my best shots but I didn't want to get too close. I have zero concept of space when I'm in first person, haha. I was trying to go around somebody and ended up beside them

Kept seeing this guy around. I think he's quite pretty, haha.

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Testing

July 23, 2011 - 7:46pm — cicadia

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Life for Rascal

July 23, 2011 - 7:42am — BouncyDeer1

It was a lazy day for Rascal and he was getting bored.He went to The Pond and found a fawn and two deer to play with.Then suddenly when he wasn't looking the fawn went over to The Pond and was with another male fawn!Rascal was so sad.."Hm she wasn't that good anyway...."He said as he tried to keep away tears.Then when he was suddenly feeling as if he should just give up on trying to act like a stag...a beautiful girl fawn caught his eye."Why hello there dear,my aren't you a sight?Hm it's ugh...cold here in the forest isn't it?Here let me nuzzle you....to ugh keep you warm?Where are you going?Oh I see...Well have you ever seen another male fawn with these babies?"He then showed off his muscles and everything..."Honey where are you going?I brought you flowers!Oh your going in the Pond?Honey...OMG!I'm coming in don't worry!"He then searched for her in The Pond but he was running low on air.Rascal couldn't find the fawn and didn't have any choice but to get out of The Pond.He then walked to one of the nice deer from earlier and said,"I wouldn't go into The Pond if I were you.."He then cried and cried and doesn't really remember much since it was all in a daze...

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