I'm not new to the game, but I'm new to these forums. =)

I lost the account info to my first deer, so I thought I'd make a new one, and that's Wint3r. Just a fawn, almost an adult. Had her for almost a month.



Ya can find meh on deviantart too! wint3rheart.deviantart.com

I have decided not to include Walter in this story as of -yet-. For now, I've changed the plot and everything, so please be aware of any lameness that follows.
This prologue is short because in a way it's a warm-up for me. Also I'm at my grandmothers and I'm a bit fussy of letting them see my work, so I try to hide it a lot too. But enjoy!

None of the characters are in the prologue, but they'll all be included soon.

Oh, and I finally decided on a title. Wewt. Each chapter will have a title except this prologue.


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With the obscure surroundings hiding the glistening black waters, the sound of a form slipping into the pond was heard. It was a creature, musky and brown with tainted and stained patches running the length of it's furry flank. The thing was an animal, reaching over seven feet in length, crowned at one end with a structure of imperial spears. Yet these remained motionless, as did the entire form as it silenty drifted along the gentle currents of the polluted liquid surrounding it.

Standing some metres away was a shadow, as silent as the night which had overtaken the forest. It was a large silhouette compared to that of the individual floating in the water, also crowned but in a more severe manner. The four powerful limbs of the monster easily turned it away from the bank on which it stood, and with a surge of strength it bolted away from the scene to be cloaked between the intricate pattern of trees.

The mass which had been afloat in the dark pond was soon at it's destination of the shallows, where it continued to remain throughout the night, as dormant as the life surrounding the area, with only the occasional panicked splash echoing from the local residents of the gloomy basin. The contamination of the water slowly spread, until not a shimmering inch of the black water was seen.

I'm from Russia) Heh... that's all))

Damn, I'm writing like mad! I already finished chapter two, I never wrote a story this fast. More danger in this one. And you'll finally find out who Fenqua's friend is, although that didn't take to long. It kinda connects two stories on TEF with each other ^^

Enjoy!

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CHAPTER TWO

‘AWAY FROM THE EDGE!’ A strong, black stag with huge antlers shouted. He was running in circles around a group of panicking deer, preventing anyone to wander of. His emerald green eyes scanned the group, to see if everyone was there. He was missing one of the younger stags, but he had already been away for weeks, so it wouldn’t be clever looking for him now the herd was in danger. The black stag stopped in front of the herd and bellowed loudly to get their attention. Immediately the deer stopped panicking and looked at him.
‘Listen up everyone, there is no need to create a chaos here. We’re going to stay calm and leave this place together. There is no need to panic if we all stay together and away from the edge of the woods.’
A fiery doe stepped forward and bowed politely, meaning she wanted to ask him a question.
‘Go ahead Nimlin, you don’t have to bow for me.’ The stag answered with a slightly irritated voice.
‘Sir, I was just wondering what we’re up against. You’re saying we have to leave our territory and stay away from the edge. But I think me and the other deer would like to know what the threat is. And if it’s worth fleeing for.’ After hearing this, other deer nodded and the crowd started to shout things like: ‘Yeah, tell us!’ or ‘Why don’t we fight?’

Name: Toomoko Deer
Gender: Stag
Age: Young fawn
Pictogram:

How to remember it: Line squiggle square xD
Friends: Reetno, Error
Mate: None, enjoying being single :3 [and is too young!]
Personality: Shy, nervous, if with a friend can seem to be overexcited.
Appearance: Normal Fawn on the game. [as if we can have anything else xD]
But here, his downy fur is golden in color, with a pale peachy underbelly, socklike markings on his legs and a mass of longer fur at the back of his head, resembling human hair. His markings also include a identical series of markings down his back which are said to be runes of some kind…
The runes are of great importance to his past.
He has no trouble with water, being a self taught swimmer and diver. Also Toomoko Deer can’t understand why the lake is cold to everyone else. He will often sit by the log for ‘hours’ just watching the water flow around him and listening to the wind on occasion as it howls through the trees.
Likes: Sitting in the water, by ‘his log’. Exploring the ruins and sticking his nose into trees.
Dislikes: Large crowds. He will run if the water becomes too crowded.
Location: At the water beside ‘his log’. Can be jumping in, resting or sleeping. Rarely ventures to the ruins.
[Toomoko Deer is a main character in the Birthrights Story Rp between me and Reetno]

Hello to all, this morning I have met many red deers and fawns, have been much beautiful one. Sin that I cannot play like you since I do not have requirement maximum demands for the forest. And me dispiace a lot for this, I would want to interact very more intensely with you. In particular I would want ringraziare an adult red deer that yesterday afternoon has made company me, creed that same offering itself like tutor, of it has spoken my friend to me, the girl whom it has made to discover the forest me. I ringrazio motion this red deer of which I do not know nothing, since it did not have symbols, I hope can remember he of me. I hope that this translation is decent, otherwise you will understand very little of what I have tried of dirvi! Embraces, Sonia/Aylys

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Ciao a tutti, questa mattina ho incontrato molti cervi e cerbiatti, è stato molto bello. Peccato che io non possa giocare come voi dato che non ho i requisiti massimi richiesti per la foresta. E mi dispiace molto per questo, vorrei interagire molto più intensamente con voi.
In particolare vorrei ringraziare un cervo adulto che ieri pomeriggio mi ha fatto compagnia, credo che si stesse offrendo come tutore, me ne ha parlato la mia amica, la ragazza che mi ha fatto scoprire la foresta.
Ringrazio moto questo cervo di cui non so niente, visto che non aveva simboli, spero possa ricordarsi lui di me.

Spero che questa traduzione sia decente, altrimenti capirete ben poco di quello che ho cercato di dirvi!

Abbracci, Sonia/Aylys

Hello

Pega: A ton of screenshots equals me creating an album.
Click next as usual: http://s21.photobucket.com/albums/b296/Pegasicorn/Late%200611%20and%20061208/?action=view&current=TEF_49_20080611_202228_339x-56_0000.jpg

Skokey had more dreams. Dreams of his father, dreams of his biological mother, and dreams of Fenqua. The dreams of Fenqua always consisted of her calling out to him, and he not being able to reach her. The next week, a week filled with painful nightmares, tortured him. He didn't want to go on like this.

Today was the day he would rid the world of him.

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It was a very dull, rainy morning. The rain lightly tapped at the forest, dampening everything it touched. It wasn't a very nice morning, and most of the deer just stayed in bed waiting for the rain to stop. The forest was quiet, nobody was up yet. The rain was the only thing audible. Not even the birds chirped.

Skokey found it pleasing to be all by himself in the forest, for the most part. He felt the pain wracking his body and spirit dulling a little, listening to the peaceful sounds of a sleeping forest. But it wasn't enough to stop him. He knew more dreams would be invading his mind at night, more dreams to torment and hurt him. He knew they would only continue, and so he was going to stop them. Once and for all. He found it quite fortunate that no one was around, there would be no one to stop him. No one, except...

A young doe was striding around the Pond. She didn't seem to care about the rain, she just wanted to play in it. Once again, Fenqua found herself right next to Skokey, and not even knowing it. She looked at the dull blue-grey of the pond for a long time. Looking at how the rain poked at the surface, causing it to ripple. It was quite peaceful, but something interupted the smoothness of the pond.

She looked up to find a stag slowly creeping into the water. Fenqua came closer to see who it was. Once again, her heart filled with joy as she looked upon the familiar thing that represented a name. She knew it was Skokey, and she ran over to the other side the greet him.

“Skokey!” She soon stopped by the shallows as she looked at him.

so im getting pretty close to where Skokey recovers from his blinding depression. and hopefully he'll be able to make more friends! (so far hes only got does being his friends, he needs some stags so he wont get too sensative XD)

SO, ill make up a list and whoever wants to get in can post saying if you want to, and ill need your bio too.

1. Vipin
2. Taiko
3. Seele
4. Magnet
5. Hope
6. Yorres
7. Saan
8. Melinda
9. Ammy
10. Darcy
11. Reetno
12. Atiq

okay, the slost are full again

okay, so it may be a few chapters and i want to get everyone in slowly. dont feel bad if your not in the next few chapters. im gonna try and not make it too hard to write everyone in. hopefully there will be a party where EVERYONE will be there! so, if your not there yet, be patient. you'll be there

OKAY, ive written most of the deer into my story now. to see what chapters youve been in, well, take a look.

Vipin = Chapter 13 + 15
Taiko = Chapter 17
Seele = Chapter 17
Magnet = N/A
Hope = Chapter 17
Yorres = Chapter 19
Saan = Chapter 17
Melinda = Chapter 17
Ammy = Chapter 17
Darcy = Chapter 17
Reetno = Chapter 17
Atiq = N/A

a lot of you were in 17 XD dont worry Magnet and Yorres, you have your parts