Revenge.

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Minor language/blood.
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All our needs put together
don't bleed on their own.

Oil slick, moving rainbow, deadly rainbow.
She had spotted him.
Amadahy had been looking for days.
Her mouth contorted into a twisted grin.
Revenge.


You're paid for an eyeful.

She had made a promise, long ago.
When she had first met him,
in a whirlwind of blood and fur,
in a fit of retribution,
she whispered in his ear.
I will tear you apart.
I will hunt you.
I will hound you.
And in the end,
I will kill you.

She broke off a branch from the nearest tree,
a dagger.
Amadahy did not make promises
without fulfilling them.



SO BEHOLD THE BULL.

Have you come to kill me? he asked,
not in the least afraid.
I'm not going to waste words.
And with that, she leaped
plunging her dagger into where his should be.


Why can't I look up,
out in the clearing?
Tell me what's there below,
end over end.


Stab.
Tear.
Rend.
Her body was growing tired.
She paused for a moment,
exhausted.
He allowed it.
You've outlived your life here.
Die, Akuji.

With renewed fervor,
she began tearing him apart.
Hooves flashed.
Feathers whirled.
The Oil Slick glinted in the sickly sunlight.
He was toying with her.


While he's safe for the moment,
guess what I'm learning?
He's never safe from the crowd.


So hats off to the bull!
No giving up!
Either way, it makes ya mad.
(Well some of us).
Hats off to the bull, keep giving all!
What ya say we make amends?


The stick had broken.
She was bleeding from a cut on her head.
Her pitch-colored feathers were tainted.
Amadahy smirked.
Now, she would use her hooves,
sharpened for the task.
Hope you didn't think this would be easy.
You're quite like her.
No wonder you're such good friends.
Let me show you what I did to her.

He reached out a tendril.




To be monumental...
could mean the beyond.


She struggled.
She kicked.
Amadahy was just a doe.
The Oil Slick wrapped tighter around her,
a constrictor.




The simpler the treasure,
means the higher the cost!

You will be just a simple to kill.
You have the same flaw.
Stubbornness.
Not knowing when to give in.
Let me fix that.

You're wrong.
It's called courage.
It's called love.
All things you're lacking, Akuji.
You attacked her when she was alone.
I won't let you have that advantage again.


He looked.



Well as for the ending,

damn right I'm learning.


Her family had heard her calls.
They had come, despite their differences.
Amadahy had lured him into a trap.
The family had been waiting there,
in the trees, for her signal.
Keme smirked.
Inola lowered her antlers.
Bartholomew, the crow,
showed his true nature.
Get off my sister.


You might ask for the door.


Snap.
Amadahy was cut free.
Let's teach Akuji about courage.


End over end.


Well I hate how the clouds hide
the gasps from above.



SO HATS OFF TO THE BULL.
No giving up.
Either way, it makes ya mad.
(Well some of us).
Hats off to the bull, keep giving all.
What ya say we make amends?




Find your challenge,
suffer miles.

Colors gray,
he brings them out.

Don't mind the challenge,
suffer miles.
A little shallow,
if I don't say
.


They began to tear him apart.
One doe had not been a threat.
Two stags,
a doe with antlers,
and another doe
were a threat.
The Oil Slick began to fall apart.
He began to bleed.
When he would focus on one,
another would pull his attention.
They were rending him.
Yet, they couldn't quite strike
the killing blow.
He was slippery.
Akuji began to cut them up,
force them to separate.
Yet still, they made him bleed.





Hats off to the bull
His time ain't up.

Bitter hell in the lion's den (for some of us).

Hats off to the bull; the sun won't set.

till the pain and the final breath.




The fun had run out.
I will see you again, he said.
And I will make you bleed
every
time.
Some day,
you won't be able to bleed any more.


With that, he was gone.

In his absence, the doe with the black feathers
silently collapsed.


They had won,
but he would be back.


Amadahy and her family
would always be ready.

Absolute. Loooove.

Absolute. Loooove.
Fincayra's picture

Hnnn. shgskl. /dead from all

Hnnn. shgskl. /dead from all the epic
The pictures, the text, the song. Everything. Love how they all got a piece of him. Marvelous work. ;u;
ocean's picture

Thanks guys. o3o I'm glad you

Thanks guys. o3o I'm glad you like it.

Yessssss.

Yessssss. <3
Hraeth's picture

Oceannnn. I told you this was

Oceannnn.
I told you this was awesome. I had to read it over a few times before it finally settled and I'm still not quite over it all the way. The music you chose is perfect. Your writing is just. Well, your writing always kicks ass, so that's not surprising, but hrrrgh. Everything goes together so well and the little pixel pictures. ;u;
Thank you so much again for doing this. -more smothering-
ocean's picture

Your comments are making me

Your comments are making me grin like a nutcase, guys.

Lung-- Thank yooou. cc:

Hrae: Haha, I'm glad you liked it so much.
Peexels. B|
-smothered- o3o

This is.. remarkable.

This is.. remarkable. <3
ocean's picture

Thank you! ;3;

Thank you! ;3;

Late, I meant to comment on

Late, I meant to comment on this the day it was posted.
ANYWAYS. This really was great. I read it both ways when I first happened upon this. After it all settled in all I could say to myself was, 'Damn, might want to avoid this girl if she's running around trying to shank others'. Haha.

Great job, Ocean.
ocean's picture

PAHAHA. That is an awesome

PAHAHA. That is an awesome thought. |D
Thank you. ;u;