drabbles/little gift-writings

just some short things that have accumulated over time...I make a lot, these are just the recent ones aha xD maybe I'll make some as gifttttss

R A V Y N N & J I N
[Ravynn, Saosin]

Her eyelashes, like spindles or thin fingers, brushed the side of her partner’s, a partner with a wreath upon his head, an endless sea of tines, and an inferno brewing inside of his eyes. And a very blue fire it was, colder and sharper than ice; the female was slight and angelic and beautiful, an ebbing darkness that moved forward and sideways and backwards at will, patches of flames burning near her shoulder blades and along her spine. Susano caressed her like one would caress a flower, knowing that the slightest flick of the wrist could cut petals in half or rip the stem from the earth. The Black Swan acknowledged the Red Inferno with grace and lust and dignity, never missing a step, perfectly in sync as they stepped forth, back, forth. In an intricate way, it was a dance of sorts, with neither of them ever straying or seeming out of place, perfectly suited with each other’s mindset and perfectly happy to be in the other’s company amidst joy and chaos.

More often than not it was chaos; they were masculine and feminine, fire and pitch, beauty and strength. Balancing the Red Inferno out, Ravyn was rewarded with protection and an eternal partner and a high bar of respect, while Saosin earned comfort and company by keeping the Black Swan as close and pure as was possible. Their relationship, though full of envy and passion and desire, also seemed to be deep and platonic, as if they very truly loved each other and found themselves within. With the blink of an eye, the bat of eyelashes, Ravyn had turned to her beloved and allowed him to warp his neck of fire around her. The patches along her back were golden and beautiful. She was black and dark and so beautiful that everything ached...

The smell of burning flesh and flowers reached their noses.

F A Y N E
[Pan, Never]


Pandemonium turned to the stag next to her, broad-shouldered and massive and blood-scathed and ruined. A warped and frightening smile danced over her face slowly; her teeth were sharp and animalistic, tipped red, jutting out so far that the ones on her top jaw almost brushed her bottom lip, black and blue and white. Doll-like eyes, rounded, stared upward, completely vertical, at the Blood Raven. “Nevermore!” came her voice, sharp and appalling and high-pitched. Never’s one ear twitched in recognition as she huffed in dissatisfaction. Though he was present, she could tell his mind was elsewhere, perhaps searching for an answer as to why Azalea’s death—his first mate, the mother of Vipin and Aspen—had been so disturbing to him. How many times have I told him that he’ll get over it and get over himself? I just tried to char the body, but it withered and then reappeared, as much of a corpse as ever, with fog coming from her eye socket…

Nevermore!

“Pandemonium.” He answered in a gasp, flinching slightly as she leaned against him fondly, the markings along her side glowing blue and casting circular lights into the sky. Her teeth were still bared, alarming as ever. The feathers upon her scalp trembled in the breeze as the massive stag shifted from one hoof to the next, staring straight ahead, seeing and unseeing.

“I don’t want to have to hurt you if you won’t pay attention…” Her fangs brushed against the thick fur of his neck and his muscles weakened—lessened, almost. She moved closer and her white teeth brushed his skin, swinging, sinking deeper and deeper and deeper until Nevermore finally uttered a ghostly sigh. Pan released her hold, teeth up to their roots in red, sticking her tongue out at him as she hopped around, blood flying from her lips. She really is the Kiss of Death, Never thought, and smiled unwittingly.

D A N N I I & KIND OF M I S A K O
[Rutilus, Taliene, Gehirn]

“Tali…?”

The brown doe blinked, staring over at her golden, shining brother. There was a film over the green of her eyes, giving them an odd, disconcerting, mossy look. Upon Rutilus’s tines were roses, bright and red and completely beautiful, and Taliene fumbled a smile absentmindedly. I’m The Rose…but am I now The Withered Rose? The Dead Rose? Am I even a Rose anymore? Oh, Rut, you’ve never had to worry about being Golden or being a Rose or anything else…I hate that, I hate this… her thoughts wandered to some more distant place that even she could not reach. The stag released an emotionally-beaten sigh, shaking his head. One of the roses released its grip and fell to the ground by Taliene’s hooves, shrinking into a ball and silently weeping.

Taliene wept with it, tears flowing over her cheeks, once pink and bright but now sunken, like a living skull. Rutilus, however strong he was, shook and shook and shook until he managed to speak, biting his lip in an effort to keep his own emotions in. A dot of red appeared.“Oh, sweetheart, don’t cry,” he whispered, all blue eyes and tears, “I love you so much. Gehirn, he just doesn’t…Doesn’t…”

“Care,” finished the doe in a deathly murmur, staring soundlessly at a particularly bright spot of sun. A dandelion was rooted in it. It was dying.

Somewhere, in the depths of the Forest, a dark stag lay, utterly defeated and utterly worthless, no longer strong or confident. In a matter of time, two does had stolen his heart and he had, on his own, had broken both of theirs’. His eyes were red, like blood, and his tears were blue with fury and sadness and regret and confusion. Like Taliene's.



J!n's picture

Wow, that is so perfect.

Wow, that is so perfect. /speechless
I love how you described them. I didn't expect this, thank you so much. ♥

awuhh, it was no problem

awuhh, it was no problem really. <3 they're such a form of inspiration, I really don't know how to describe it...I'm overjoyed you like it. -hugs-
Reyy's picture

Jin linked this to me in a

Jin linked this to me in a chat, and when I read it:
Quote:
[20:56] ravyn: Whoah...
[20:56] Jin: Indeed...


It's amazing. Really. Everything you describe just seem so perfect, especially Ravyn.
Goddd, I am speechless. Haha.

Thank you so much. I'll add this to Circadian Rhythm. <3
You're number 14 now. (:

geez you guys wtf ;_; you're

geez you guys wtf ;_; you're so flattering, it makes me so happyy aha. I'm not that good, seriouslyyy. I'm so glad you both like it; I wrote it when I was on as Vipin and saw you two dancing and messing about [with Dag and Kaoori too] and...yeah, they're just a really intriguing couple. thank you sososo much <3 <3
Fledermaus's picture

WHAT THE HELL how are you so

WHAT THE HELL how are you so damned TALENTED at WRITING BEAUTIFUL WORDS that make me WEEP with how AMAZING YOU ARE.

CAPSLOCK.


No but really your stuff is friggin fantastic. <3
Kaoori's picture

give yourself more credit,

give yourself more credit, girl! You are awesome at these things.
I love all your writing. You can paint pictures in my head.
Seele's picture

Whoa! I'm quite speechless

Whoa! I'm quite speechless but will do my best! Your writing flows so nicely, it's a joy to read! Taliene made me feel really sad, and I adore how you described Gehirn's feelings, especially as it's so accurate! You've got quite some skills, I'm amazed.

I... ...I... I don't know

I...
...I...
I don't know what to say ;A; Thankyou so much, Sarie, your writings take my breath away god <3 I don't even...sdfkjhf <3 I loved Taliene's thoughts about the 'rose' and such, because they're incredibly accurate. The other writings are beautiful too, of course, ah~ <3333333 -hughughug-

YOU'RE ALL TOO NICE ;_; I

YOU'RE ALL TOO NICE ;_; I look at writing so often and wish I could write better but I guess you all really like it...I'm overjoyed. D8 I actually had things for Kaoori/Wesker and Masque/Tuna and Virgil and blahlvbsblha but I'll update this often; I write a lot. it might just even be from seeing a deer in-Forest or stumbling across updates. B:

DANNII /fumbletacklehug aawwrr I'm so glad, and thank you too Mis 8D I was hoping I portrayed their current relationship right, I'm sorry theirs' is so short /lazy
fayne's picture

how did I not see

how

did I not

see this

SDFLKSJDSLF hi you're the best

I LOVE HOW AZALEA DIDN'T MAKE IT ALL AWKWARD pan just tried to help him out sdfdf <3333 THEY ARE THE BEST and your writing skills are glorious. you are incredible sir.

because you were too busy

because you were too busy singing Hey Jude like a BOSS

Azalea makes everything slightly worse I SWEAR SHE JUST....SUCKS. IN A GOOD WAY. LOLWAT?! I MEAN SHE'S AWESOME but I hate her BUT SHE'S AWESOME you go Pan, you go gurl. help NebNeb. <3<3 YOU ARE GLORIOUS
fayne's picture

also if you were to write

also if you were to write about T and M

I might cry tears of joy

JUST SAYIN'

the arrangement of that song was really bizarre when we sang it ffff for like two minutes all the sopranos had to sing was JOODOOJOODOOJOODOO etc
Kaoori's picture

also, just asdf

also, just asdf <1