Divine Intervention Chapter List/Info

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I decided to write a disclaimer, just to be safe. If you're writing a story, don't worry about doing this too unless you think you should. It's really not necessary, but I wanted to do it anyway.

-- DISCLAIMER --

The following story was written for fun only. QuadRaptor does not take any credit for the creation, implementation, concept, designs, gameplay, or ideas of the game The Endless Forest. The story was only meant to explain the origin of a character within The Endless Forest, as well as attempt to explain many aspects of the game, just for fun. This does not mean the ideas QuadRaptor came up with are linked or otherwise associated with the original plans for The Endless Forest. The story does not intend to advocate the practice of magic or express any views on religion or politics. The story does not intend to interfere or contradict any ideas or events written by another person who wrote a story about The Endless Forest, and any similarities to any other story are completely unintentional. Blah blah blah you get the idea. Eye

In short, it was only written for fun!



Chapter 1 - Birth and Death


Chapter 2 - Early Fawnhood


Chapter 3 - The Long Road Ahead


Chapter 4 - Quad's Decision


Chapter 5 - The Journey Home


Chapter 6 - ABIOGENESIS


Epilogue


Divine Intervention Official Themesong
Shinedown - Second Chance
Kanaf's picture

ooohooohooohooo... could

ooohooohooohooo... could Vessel be in there somewhere? but as an adult though. ill give you his bio if you need it Smiling
quadraptor's picture

He could be one of the stags

He could be one of the stags at the river. They're basically there to greet Quad when he first arrives (what actually happened to me the first day I ever played), but since I didn't know their pictograms it can be anyone.

Or he could be in the last chapter. It's up to you. Eye

I got the bio, too, so don't worry about providing it.

can i be the fawn who

can i be the fawn who accompanies you in chapter 3 casting?! please quad.
Kanaf's picture

he probably wouldnt be one

he probably wouldnt be one for greeting, so id probably put him in the last chapter Laughing out loud and thanks Eye

i think "The Endless

i think "The Endless Journey" is a nice name for your story and as for the name brook, i think its a beautiful choice.
quadraptor's picture

Skokey - Done! Mazey - I was

Skokey - Done!

Mazey - I was hoping you'd ask to be in it! Eye You're definately in!
I might consider your title, it sounds interesting. I want to see what others come up with before I decide on anything. As for Brooke I'm sure that's what I'll go with.
Ephra's picture

It's fine with me if you

It's fine with me if you want to stick my deer into your story. Smiling Can't wait to see it written!
Her's picture

Chapter 2 - Early

Chapter 2 - Early Fawnhood
-- *Stag/Doe in a crowd of three near the river*
-- *Stag/Doe in a crowd of three near the river*
-- *Stag/Doe in a crowd of three near the river*
-- *Stag or Doe who shows Quad around the Endless Forest and explains who the Twin Gods are*
-- Demon (let me know if this is okay to include you)
-- Twenty-One (let me know if this is okay to include you)


I think that'd fit Her best. If not, you can just throw her in somewhere, or not at all. C: I just love seeing how people see my beloved deer; few can get her pirate-self captured along with her obsessive hopping and running. I'd love to read your story whether you decide to squeeze her in or not, so I won't bawl my eyes out if she's not. <3 It sounds very good!

As for a title, if it hasn't been mentioned, try "Lost and Found" or something along those lines. I may have gotten the synopsis wrong so if it doesn't fit, again, throw it out the window. I'm not feeling so creative writing-wise right now so it's probably too generic; even my own writing is turning crummier as I go, but that's enough about me.

With the predator, I firstly thought humans, but I doubt that'd fit. Owl also came into mind but they obviously don't eat deer unless you make yours giant-sized and extra evil. Panther sounds best to me, though. I've yet to see a feline in a story.

I'll be waiting to read! Laughing out loud
Scythe's picture

If you need another doe,

If you need another doe, feel free to use Wyvern. ^^ Here is her profile: http://endlessforest.org/community/wyverns-profile

As for your decisions, I honestly can't think of a good name for you story. Sorry about that. :/ However, as far as the predator goes, a coyote pack could definitely work. Or perhaps a mountain lion?
Kanaf's picture

hmm... you know, Quad, i was

hmm... you know, Quad, i was thinking and wondering if i could change where Vessel is in the story?
quadraptor's picture

Sure, where to?

Sure, where to?
Kanaf's picture

after thinking about it, i

after thinking about it, i think Vessel could work better as one of the "elder" stags that councils Quad on his journey (or whatever it was ^^; ) somehow i think it would work, because usually when you have characters like that, one of them should be a little negative (and Vessel's reeeaaaally good at that XD) it was an idea, but if you dont think he's fit for that role, then thats fine too Smiling
Shiori's picture

Hmmm...I'll volenteer Darcy

Hmmm...I'll volenteer Darcy to be a stag at the river ^^? Probably falling in @_@ or being pushed by Wyvern -giggle- Or 100% at your will! We'll go with that. Anywho, he's a decent fawn greeter methinks.
quadraptor's picture

Gotcha, updated both Vessel

Gotcha, updated both Vessel and Darcy's roles in the story.

Thanks!
Pegasicorn's picture

Would any of my deer work? I

Would any of my deer work? I don't know who or where to suggest, so I'll just say, bio's linked in my sig. ^^;

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The Dragonfly Deer:
land|scape|goat
magnets don't always attract
4.9 on the Richter Scale

Hmm wat about Ammy? I'm not

Hmm wat about Ammy? I'm not sure if she would fit being a little scardy cat. but take alook at her bio

http://www.endlessforest.org/community/ammys-bio
SilentOrosco's picture

My deer isn't in the forest

My deer isn't in the forest alot but if you want to slap him in there somewhere you can. He's shy but a great shoulder-to-cry-on type deer.

http://www.endlessforest.org/community/silents-bio

Dim could accompany Quad in

Dim could accompany Quad in chapter three?

He certainly ain't aggressive, but even though he doesn't talk much he can be quite supportive. c:

His Bio

Could Saan be one of the

Could Saan be one of the deer who accompanies Quad in chapter three aswell? 8D She is a bit boisterous, but can be very calm and supportive when it gets serious Laughing out loud

Her bio is on my user page Smiling

edit: if i'm too late, just throw her in anywhere, I don't mind!

EDIEDIT: If you want an aggressive deer you can put my stag Scorn in it 8< his bio is on my page aswell Smiling
Seele's picture

I mighta have a good

I mighta have a good agressive deer for you in chapter three! Auge is such a meany sometimes D: XD She's easily mad and get's all fighty when she is...
But I dunno, you should choose the deer you think fit best~

--Stays a lonely Seele

WOW! quad u sure have a lot

WOW! quad u sure have a lot of requests here. thanks for including me! best regards! Smiling
Seele's picture

..D: Are we being rivals

..D: Are we being rivals heeree?

Auge: *Pushes Scorn over* AHAHAHAHHIII~

--Stays a lonely Seele
quadraptor's picture

Okay let's see.... -

Okay let's see....

- Pegasicorn: I can put in all three if you'd like. If there's one of the roles you think one (or many) of them are suitable for, let me know. Otherwise I'll put them in the last part.

- Ammyluva: I put Ammy in the last section. Let me know if you want her in another role. Eye

- Silent: Same deal, I put Silent in the last section but if you want him in another role, let me know. Eye

- Lizardfish: Dim's got the part. Smiling

- Seele and Saan: YOU TWO, FIGHT TO THE DEATH OVER THE PART!! Laughing out loud :D Laughing out loud
Nah it's fine. They both get to come along.

Parts still open are in bold. I really need a third stag for the river part in Chapter 2 so I can continue the story, but any roles that want to be filled are greatly appreciated!
SilentOrosco's picture

Well since no one seems to

Well since no one seems to be fighting for it...

Sure Silent isn't really old but as his bio states he spends quite a bit of time observing how the forest works and such. So unless someone more suitable comes along can he be one of the Elders?
IoRez's picture

What about wolves?

What about wolves?
SilentOrosco's picture

For the thing that

For the thing that attacks... Maybe a grizzly? Or some other type of bear.

Mountain lions also prey on deer.
Kanaf's picture

quite honestly, i support

quite honestly, i support the panther idea. but it has to be a black panther! either that, or.... i dunno. but i like the black panther XD
Pegasicorn's picture

Technically, that would be a

Technically, that would be a black leopard or black jaguar. Eye
But I support the idea. =]

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The Dragonfly Deer:
land|scape|goat
magnets don't always attract
4.9 on the Richter Scale
Kanaf's picture

i was actually going to

i was actually going to correct myself a while ago, but i didnt feel like it XD
quadraptor's picture

"It needs to be something

"It needs to be something that preys on deer or larger animals, and I do not want it to be a wolfor a tiger."

Just a personal preference that they're not wolves.

I think I've decided on coyotes, but I'll leave it up for a bit.

Silent - I'll put him as an elder. He doesn't necessarily have to be old, just wise.
Fenqua's picture

Can Silvery be in it? She

Can Silvery be in it? She could be a friend of Quad if you want, but she's a bit weird...
You can read it in her biography: http://www.endlessforest.org/community/fenqua-and-silverys-biography

I hope the fact she has visions about the future isn't a bad thing...

About the animals, I think coyotes are better. Panther usually hunt alone, don't they? And coyotes hunt in packs, I think that's cool xD

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul

Oh and by the way, could you

Oh and by the way, could you change Saan's name to Scorn please? [he's the evil one!]
his bio is here

Saan would never dream of being aggressive! 8D
quadraptor's picture

Silvery and Saan - Done and

Silvery and Saan - Done and Done Smiling
Seele's picture

Oh lol! Now I see it

Oh lol! Now I see it too!
Auge is my agressive deer Smiling Seele is way too calm XD Her bio is on the same page as Seele's, but I guess you must've noticed ^^..

--Stays a lonely Seele
Path to home's picture

I wouldn't mind seeing Path

I wouldn't mind seeing Path in it somewhere in there Smiling
Laruna's picture

About the animals-- how

About the animals-- how about bears?

I'd love for Laruna to be in your story, but only if you have room for him. Smiling
quadraptor's picture

I was hoping you'd post up!

I was hoping you'd post up! Smiling

I definately have a part for Laruna. After all, Quad modeled after him when he was a fawn. Eye

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v460/MarleonTakenawa/futureme1.jpg
Pegasicorn's picture

Since you mentioned before

Since you mentioned before that the "elder" deer don't necessarily have to be old, would Magnet work as the third one? He spent his fawnhood mostly observing in the forest (and still does at times), so he may be wise enough now.
Otherwise, my deer could just go at the end of the story. =]

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The Dragonfly Deer:
land|scape|goat
magnets don't always attract
4.9 on the Richter Scale
Verdalas's picture

Le gasp, I never said it was

Le gasp, I never said it was okay! Of course it is. Eye
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Click the eggies, save a life!
http://dragcave.ath.cx/user/50923
Kanaf's picture

oh crap lol Quad! i forgot

oh crap lol Quad! i forgot the fact that Vessel is a mute XDDD if that struck you at all, i apologize. Vessel can still whisper XD *is embarrassed*
quadraptor's picture

Perfectly fine - Vessel

Perfectly fine - Vessel could whisper to the other elder stags. Eye

YAYZ! when does chapter 3

YAYZ! when does chapter 3 come!? im excited srry

can i be in chapter 6 on the

can i be in chapter 6 on the return too please quad?
quadraptor's picture

Actually everyone who was in

Actually everyone who was in a previous chapter will be at the end. Eye
Laruna's picture

I still think bears would be

I still think bears would be cool.

p.s. Thanks for adding Laruna into the story, Quad. <333
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Oh I forgot to mention I was

Oh I forgot to mention I was going to go with the Coyotes. I decided I needed a group for the part, not a solitary animal.

Of course that basically leans towards Wolves Puzzled

But I'm still gonna do Coyotes instead.
Fenqua's picture

I was surprised to see Quad

I was surprised to see Quad was a stag already. And since Silvery is still a fawn, can she still be a best friend of him? I actually never thought of her in adult form, and she seems quite cute the way she is ^^;

To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
quadraptor's picture

Of course! I tried to

Of course! I tried to explain things as they happen in The Endless Forest, such as random events, spells, and sudden growth. You could simply say it's not Silvery's Doe Day yet, but she could still be one of Quad's friends.

(He loves hanging out with fawns anyway Eye )

omg i love it Quad Meby

Smiling omg i love it Quad Smiling Meby hmmm.......

Eye dnt worry chatting to myself XD

still.... Smiling Sticking out tongue
squeegie's picture

May Squeegie and Loofa (or

May Squeegie and Loofa (or just one) Be in the last chapter? (: