Advice?

October 22, 2009 - 4:56am — Bayleen

This is of my wolfie charrie FleuraLune ^^ This was done really quickly on my tablet. I'd like to get some advice from all of you great artists out here on TEF on what I can improve on from this ref-thingy. Maybe how to do the head and body? A sketch of that or something would help

Thanks!!!

Concept

October 22, 2009 - 5:53am — trigger_mortis

The head looks pretty good

The head looks pretty good for a wolf-deer hybrid...maybe just spice up the ears a little? maybe make them slightly pointier and more upright than a typical deers to go with a more wolf-like appearance?

So far I like what you've got for the legs and feet

Maybe when I get a chance (after doing tons of other art stuff) I'll give her (him?) a little sketch

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October 22, 2009 - 7:46am — Bayleen

Thank you so much!!! I'll

Thank you so much!!! I'll work on the ears ^^ (She is a she xD) And maybe a sketch would be great, but if you really don't have the time, it's perfectly fine ^^

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October 22, 2009 - 4:17pm — trigger_mortis

Well after Monday, I'm done

Well after Monday, I'm done with exams until December so that should give me plenty of drawing time!

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October 22, 2009 - 4:46pm — Bayleen

8D Thank you very much ^^

8D Thank you very much ^^ And here's a link for the sketch for further detail of how she looks: http://endlessforest.org/community/fleurs-updates-new-events

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