Seed's poetry corner: a trio of poems

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Instead of posting an entry about today's drama, here are a few poems. Points to those who can guess the forms being used.

Birch Forest Love Poem

I run with you across the hills,
and chase you through gold-tipped grass.
When you're near me, I get chills,
so I run with you across the hills.
I know these aren't just quick thrills,
no -- we're trying to stop each second's pass
while you run with me across the hills,
and chase me through the gold-tipped grass.

Tears of an Idol

Her tears fall and flow,
cascade into a river
that only widens.

The Piece of the Forgotten

They are encrusted with vines,
the walls of this old chapel.
The dead knew their peace here,
and people came reliably.

The walls of this old chapel
are disused and delapitated.
People came reliably,
and it was sacred.

Disused and delipitated,
it becomes a great puzzle.
And it was sacred!
It is nothing but a pile of memories.

It becomes a great puzzle,
That dead know their peace here --
they are nothing but a pile of memories,
and those are encrusted with vines.


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I love the first one.

I love the first one. ^^

They all are very good!
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Thank you very much

Thank you very much ^^
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Lovely, lovely, lovely. I

Lovely, lovely, lovely. I love them all, but I think the first and third are my favourites.
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I love ALL of them, but the

I love ALL of them, but the third one is my favorite. (: That is a nifty poem form. I've never seen it before, but its cooool. <3 I see that you use the second line of each stanza as the first line to the next stanza - and the last line of each stanza becomes the third of the next stanza. (: Ahhhh that is so cool. It's neat because it forces you to find a way to use that phrase in a different way in the next stanza. -applaud-
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it's called a pantoum. It's

it's called a pantoum. It's one of my favorite forms, actually.
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The Piece of the Forgotten&

The Piece of the Forgotten& tears of idol are remarkable. threw one to ten, nine is the score for both. Smiling

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