Have you ever seen a ghost?

Kaoori's picture
(this is all told from Kaoori's point of view. Kthx)



Maybe it was all just a dream. After hearing of what had happened I have been quite on edge. The smallest noise sends me into a panic, and even if a call of a fawn sounds the slightest bit out of the ordinary I run, only to find that they were simply playing as normal.

but still.. something is not right in this forest. There is a sense of dischord where there was not before..



I made my way to the Birch woods. They were so vast that I could lay down and gather my thoughts without risk of being found. But suddenly, it seemed, out of nowhere.. a fawn appeared. From the mist..



something about this fawn..did not smell right. In fact.. she smelled of nothing. Of air..
Every bone and muscle told my body to flee, to run.. But she seemed afraid, and scared, and how could I leave a scared fawn alone?



when the young fawn passed right through me, I had everything I could do to not bolt right there. But she seemed so upset afterward.


could this be..? the fawn...? THE fawn?
An involuntary shudder creeped through me like 1000 beetles invading my veins. But she seemed so alone, so vulnerable...

..so... still alive..
is this what ghosts were like..?

She lay down after that, and I lay beside her. In her name, I vowed to help protect the fawns of the forest from any sort of harm.


Would she ever be able to truly rest now? Or will she be doomed to wander forever now?
I watched her disappear in the rain, and I shivered. I wasn't sure if it was from the raindrops.


I lay back down again, not sure how to act. I didn't want to tell anyone.. should I? Would they even believe that I saw a ghost?
I flattened my ears and lay in the tall grass like a newborn fawn. Not even the Forest felt like it could comfort me right now.

------
"Kaoori, what's wrong with you? You look like you've seen a ghost!"
"That's... that's because I have."

...D: <3 -- Dannii <3

...D: <3

-- Dannii <3

IoRez's picture

"She is a resltess spirit,

"She is a resltess spirit, Kaoori, lost between this place and the next.
Her blood cries out from the ground, and will not be satisfied unless...
She is now a memory, a particle falling through the air.
Tomorrow is already gone."


Wow. Yorres is even moodier than usual.


Yorres, Lightbringer

So beautiful kaoori, oh my

So beautiful kaoori, oh my goodness and the music is so perfect also...
This is great.
The fawn seemed to like you!

Wow. This was so good.
Thank you for this, I'll post it on the fawn's bio right now.
Excellent work, and the descriptions were dead-on.

endorianki's picture

Kaoori, I remember meeting

Kaoori, I remember meeting you as a happy, frivolous deer...now that has changed. The fawn knew.

Perhaps you will never be the old Kaoori again. I must leave...before Prytariel is gone, like Endo. She must stay joyful- this music is wonderful..run, Tariel! But one more thing...

I saw that fawn too.

Endo's Tree + Bio

D: W..was that the fawn with

D: W..was that the fawn with you just now?!
Hm...better that Queze didn't know about it >_> he has a rather brutal view of wandering spirits...
Anyway, great writing, and the screen shots were a nice addition!

~----------------------------------------------------------------------~

-hint hint nudge nudge-

-hint hint nudge nudge- XD
Poor Queze was so confuzed at all the sad meotions the fawn was giving him. LMAO.

He was! lmao! He just

He was! lmao! He just figured it was because if his skull mask, seeing as how fawns have been afraid of it before...wonder how a dead fawn would take to seeing someone walking around with a dead deer head o_o ?



~----------------------------------------------------------------------~

LMAO GOOD POINT! And I don't

LMAO GOOD POINT!
And I don't think the fawn really noticed.
Hehe! :B

ocean's picture

Beautiful. Lovely

Beautiful. Lovely screenshots as well. Love the ending quotes-ends it on a dramatic note. Shocked
Zergarikiaka's picture

Even a few years later, this

Even a few years later, this is chilling.
Flyleaf's picture

This was really Beautiful and

This was really Beautiful and a little sad .....Poor fawn !
I enjoyed the reading .... Smiling
Avatar @ Sluggs Siggy @ Amazegenalo
Bouncing Fly by Mary13
Kaoori's picture

Zerg how did you find this

Zerg how did you find this xD

and thank you, fly ;;
IoRez's picture

Hard to believe this happened

Hard to believe this happened 3 years ago.
Kaoori's picture

I know.. doesn't seem like it

I know.. doesn't seem like it at all.
Zergarikiaka's picture

|D I used the search engine

|D I used the search engine to find ghost fawn stories. Think I saw this before but forgot to comment! XD