Family.

Aegle's picture
I could feel the autumn air slowly approaching, the rut approaching. The leaves are slowly beginning to change to their sunset shades of orange, yellow, and red. This was my favorite time of the year.
Walking by the Great Oak I noticed a large orange lump laying inside of it. I had never seen such beautiful colors of orange before, not even the autumn leaves could match. I then noticed that it was a large stag his antlers stretched outwards, scraping the ground beneath them. Why was his chest not moving? After a few moments it registered in my head... He was dead? I ran as fast as my injuries would let me and stood beside the massive body.
" S-Sir! Wa-Wake up! P-Please!"
The stags body quivered softly and his his dark blue eyes opened and squinted as they inspected me.
" A-Are you a-al-allright?"
He grunted softly and whispered in his husky voice "Y-Your more beautiful than I i-imagined"
I was astoined. What had he just said to me? Did I know this creature?
My eyes widened and fear rushed through my veins.
"E-Excuse me... W-Who are you? A-And you didn't an-answer my question..."
His eyes were so beautiful, they reminded me of the pond. So blue, such a crisp blue...
" I'm.. well my name does not matter anymore my dear... but you must be Aegle..."A small grin appeared on his face. "I've been waiting for you... but it s-seems I will h-have to wait again... "
His breathing slowed more. It was now that I noticed a large mound near him. He had surrounded it in flowers. My eyes surveyed the grave and I could feel him watching me.
" I-I'm not sure I understand."
In his last breathes of air he muttered out " You wouldn't but A-Aegle... I am your-your...
I could finish the words myself. He was my father...
"I l-love you"
And his his gorgeous blue eyes shut for the very last time.


It is times like this that I remeber all I have lost....

Truly captivating, you have

Truly captivating, you have done a very good job writing this short snippet. It's little bits like this that really makes Aegle and their past more intriguing.
Keep up the great work. Smiling

Aegle's picture

Aww! Thank you so much! <33

Aww! Thank you so much! <33
fayne's picture

Very nice. 8D -fail comment

Very nice. 8D -fail comment BUTIMEANITYES-
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Bios
Aegle's picture

FAYNE MAKES FAIL COMMENTS.

FAYNE MAKES FAIL COMMENTS. D8

Oh my god That's so sad.

Oh my god
That's so sad. ;_;
but lovely

~Paz
deer: Amary, Melinoe, Oisín, Maera
Aegle's picture

The sadder part is Aegle is

The sadder part is Aegle is not even that sad about him dying. :c
And thank you!
Fledermaus's picture

;______; Awww that was

;______;
Awww that was sweet. But still rather depressing. :<
I lurve your writing. It's the best. <3








Zergarikiaka's picture

awwww.... *hugs poor aegle*

awwww.... *hugs poor aegle*

Aegle's picture

Flef: Thank you! <3 And nooo

Flef: Thank you! <3 And nooo yours definatly is. c:
Zerg: :'c She is just always in drama xD
Kaoori's picture

Very nice writing! I think I

Very nice writing! I think I was as shocked as she was at the end. Poor thing!

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I'm a little wolf inside a girl.

Lightbringer-apprentice to Yorres
Aegle's picture

I'm glad you were surprised.

I'm glad you were surprised. :3 That is what I was aiming for! And thank you very much!
Kinsmate's picture

Shoot me. "Traveling makes

Shoot me.
"Traveling makes a man wiser, but also less happy."