revolt (slight violence warning)

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"Feeling... feeling better now, yes, Schwesterlein?"



"Hm... it... it hurts..."



"but hm hm.. you calmed down now, yes...?



"Hi hi.. ye... yes... it's better now... you.. you are here.



"Yes... yes I am here... I am here..."
The white stag gently nuzzled her neck fur, gave her a kiss on her cheek. Then he startet to giggle.
"Now... now tell me... tell me... who did that... tell me. tell me..."




She looked at him. Slowly she shook her head.



"Wh... what...?"
Cofusion.




"No."
Determination.




"He he.. come.. come don't be stupid sister, yes...? Tell me... who did that to you."
Anger.




"No."
Determination.




"TELL ME!"
With a fast movement he pushed her over, placing his body on hers. She screamed in pain as he touched the wounds she gained from the fight. His face close to hers, glaring at her he hissed like an angry snake.
"Now...tell me .. pleasssssse. Stupid sisterrrrr....."
Rage.




"Ah! Jack... Jack.. you ... you hurt me...!"
Tears run down her face.
But still... determination.
"Sto... stop it... p... please...




"Tell me ... who did that to you... and I will stop.. my love..."
His voice was gently... he gave her a tender kiss. Like a caring lover.




"N...no."
Determination.




"WHY NOT?!"
Rage.




"You... you will fight her... you always fight.. I don't... don't want those fights... anymore...."
Tears running down her face.
"One day I will lose you in this fights.. I... I can't alllow that anymore... I.. I will make you stop playing this game..."
She looked in his eyes...
"I will protect you ... I will protect you from yourself... this.. this time I... I will... p...p..."
Her voice broke. Her brother's eyes made her stop.




He glared at her. Anger... confusion...
...all of the sudden a smile.
"Her...?"
Dangerous laughter escaped his throat.
"So... it was a doe, hm?"




"OH!"
Shock.
"no no.. no I ment.... I said... I ment..."
STUPID GIRL!




"That... makes it easier for me now.. hm hm hm... then there are only tow left."
A satisfied smile on his face.
"Thanky ou my love..."
He kissed her, got down from her.
She moaned.




"N... no."
Desperation as he got up... stretched... and turned around.




"Don't worry, Schwesterlein... I won't be gone for long.:"
Satisfaction.




"No... NO!"
She jumped up, ignoring the screaming pain from her wounds.
"I... I won't... wont let you do that!"
Stepping in front of her brother... two razor sharp blades growing from her head.
"C... can't.... let... you do that..."




"So...?"
No emotion.
"You want to stop me."
Just staring




"Y... yes."
Determination.
Lowering her head




"How..?
No emotion.
One step closer.




"I... I am stronger than you!"
Determination. She won't retreat this time.
"Y... you know that."
Her legs started to shake.




"Are you...?"
Another step closer. Close enough to the blades...
... piercing fur and skin.
Blood drops down.




Numb.
Barely able to stand anymore.




"Are you stron enough... to fight me?"
Closer, blades piercing deeper into his body.
Slowly she starts to back off. Struggling...
"Are you trong enough... to lose me?"




"J.. Jack..."
Breaking down.
"B... but.. but I love you.. I LOVE YOU!"




"So...?"
No emotion.
Just staring




"P...please.."



No emotion.
No word. He started to move, slowly trotting away.




"No... no NO! Stay.. STAY don't... don't leave me..."
To weak to move. Tears running down her face.
"P.. please... brother.... Jack.... JAKOB!"




He didn't turn around. He just went on.
Don't turn around, Jack, move on.
Starting to smile his distorted smile.
Move on, don't turn around.
Hearing her screaming.
Some... sometimes... it is better... to not turn around.
He heard her scream.
"Yes.. yes... I love you Jane..." he mumbled... giggling.. snickering...


He willl be gone for now.


But not forever.


He won't leave her.
He simply couldn't leave her.
He would die if he did.
She was the only one... he cared about.



He loved her
He depended on her
He hated her for that
... but he loved her.


He hated her because he loved her.


He loved her
He depended on her



But... this was something...
he will never let her know about.










Their relationships is really

Their relationships is really intense. o_o
I loved this. <3

thank you

thank you <3 ^^



though.. i would prefare... 'complicated'. |DD

Lol, yeah, it's complicated

Lol, yeah, it's complicated as well, but intense was the first word that hit me after reading this. :')

Your writing...Jack and

Your writing...Jack and Jane's relationship...

'Tis love, my dear. &hearts
Zeezie.'s picture

I allready told you that all

I allready told you that all your writings are awesome souce!
Gone.

GingerNut's picture

The structure and dynamics of

The structure and dynamics of this = pure eyecandy.

This is amazing <3

I always read these so fast

I always read these so fast because I can’t wait to see what the next line says. They are so intense
Pegasicorn's picture

Twisted in an awesome way. If

Twisted in an awesome way.
If that makes sense. |D

aaw.. thanks a lot you guys

aaw.. thanks a lot you guys <3


*just noticed the coments now* |DD