Red lines please? c:

FishBiscuit's picture
This would ordinarily be a regular picture post, but the red lines that I'm requesting are a gift for a friend and I know she'll see it if I post it on here.. That wouldn't be a very good surprise, would it?

The picture is currently in mannequin-ish-sketch form and I would like to get as much anatomical feedback as I can so that this will be a decent picture for a wonderful friend.
If you would like to offer me such help, post here that you would like to and send me an email to Flying_Doughnuts@hotmail.com saying who you are and what format you'd like the file to be in! I have SAI and Photoshop and from there I can save it as .png and whatnot.


General critique too would be helpful as I feel it's a little too loose looking. Maybe you'll know what I mean when you see it.
Terabetha's picture

I will e-mail you later this

I will e-mail you later this afternoon, once I am done class. Laughing out loud

edit: I just sent you an e-mail. I don't check that account frequently so if you would comment here when you have replied I'd appreciate it.
FishBiscuit's picture

No wonder I didn't see your

No wonder I didn't see your email earlier; somehow you got sent to my spam folder ;__; Bad Hotmail!
But now I have it, of course c: And thank you for offering to help me!


(and anybody who is reading this, I wouldn't be disappointed if multiple people volunteered.. HINT HINT lol )

Terabetha's picture

Bah silly hotmail! I will

Bah silly hotmail!
I will have a look at it asap and email you the redlined copy sometime this morning.
Baal's picture

I'd gladly give it a look

I'd gladly give it a look though I can't promise I'll be much help. But I'll try! ^_^
Email sent.
Terabetha's picture

Alright so I have just sent

Alright so I have just sent you off a copy of red-lines and general comments, so check your spam folder (dramatic fist shake at hotmail) and let me know if that was what you had in mind.