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Little sister, why do you cry?
What are all those tears about?
Are you afraid?
Or are you ashamed?
Ashamed of the things you have done
… and of the things you will do
Little sister, come closer now, come
I want to enjoy your tears
Those precious, liquid crystals
Your most beautiful gift
Those tears you shed for me
Little sister, why do you close your eyes?
Are you unable to bear my sight anymore?
My eyes, my body… the scars?
Do you remember where they came from?
Of course you do, you remember well
… some of them are your doing
Little sister, look closer now, look
This is what you get
For being a bad girl
For spilling your brothers blood
But after all it was a pleasure
This pain you gave me
Little sister, why do you shiver?
Is it the fear of your brother?
Of me, who was always there?
Of the things I could do?
I would never kill you, you know that
… don’t be afraid my love
Little sister, please let me touch you, please
It’s just the pain I want to share
Your tears I want to taste
It is you I want to hold
And never let go again
&hearts . awesome writings :3
Ah~ The psychology of their
"... some of them are your doing"
... Only to be revealed as a facade. Whether or not Jane actually meant to hurt Jack, was it for saftey? I'm guessing that it is, ultimately, the reader's decision of if it was meant in either aggression or protection. Whether or not that was your intention, I can only envy the way that you have these characters react to one other. Writing a relationship like this is so incredibly difficult, and it can only either fly or die. In the case of these two, it soars.
Honestly Alice, you are getting so much better with each and every piece you write. To be able to improve this much is something only I can dream of.
*Pointless fan raving over* Eh, sorry ;;
Again, poor Jane. D: But the
But the writing is awesome, as always. n__n
Thank you guys
@ginger: habeda habeda habeda *fades*
good stop writing stuff like that one day i will spontaneous set fire to myself because of blushing and emberrassment |DDDD t--thaks...
*is kinda speechelss and goes to bed now*
I sorry.. D': *Fades away*
I'm really not trying to flatter you, I just tend to rave when I see something that I like xD;;