Changing history

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Dag's old story blogs will be updated over the next few days, and I thought to save confusion I'll simply write here what it is I am changing as a time-saver; I don't want the old blogs to be bumped.

There are a few things that need changing, but the most important is that I am removing the element in which the Season's refer to Dag as their Son. I am changing this because I feel it makes more sense for him to simply be a charge or theirs/a servant for their purpose.

Crackéd Smile | Winter
    Removal of 'Son' element.
     ^ 'Dagnire short-hand inclusion in a stanza to fit.

"I am here as a friend." | Winter
    Removal of 'Son' element; emphasis on servant instead.
    Subtle suggestion that the forest is a divine place, and the seasons also command the worlds outside it.
    ^To justify the seasons coming and going, and Spring's tie to an ocean outside the forest.
I: Collapse the Light | Autumn
    Removal of 'Son' element; emphasis on servant instead.
    Corrected a character error.
II: Numb the Infection | Autumn
    Replaced flash player with youtube button.
III: I'd choose right now | Autumn
    Replaced flash player with youtube button.
I: Brontide | Spring
    Replaced flash player with youtube button.
    Removal of 'Son' element.
II: Thunderclap | Spring
    Replaced flash player with youtube button.
    Removal of 'Son' element.
III: Collosus | Spring
    Replaced flash player with youtube button.
    Last image needs updating
IV: Oblivion | Spring
    Replaced flash player with youtube button.
    Text image needs updating
I: Fissure | Summer
    Mistakes corrected.