apel's art advice/redlines/critiques blog thing

Apeldille's picture



Hello there. Been thinking of setting up a helpful advice/critique/redlines blog, in case people would be interested in that. If I ever stop being lazy and busy maybe there will be some sort of tutorial or walkthroughs or what-have-you too.

So if you want some critique or redlines or some sort of advice on a picture, I'll do my best. (Disclaimer here about I don't know everything/I can be wrong/etc etc).



Some general advice:

I know many people like the idea of having a style, but don't let it become an excuse for being lazy and not look up how things work. You can have a very distorted style while still maintaining some sort of 'correctness'!

References. If you are going to draw something and want it accurate, you need to know what it looks like. References are a Very Good Thing. I tend to use a lot of them when I paint; if I am unsure about what something looks like, I google it (or even better, if the possibility is there, look at it in real life).

Get out of your comfort zone sometimes! That's how you improve and grow as an artist: trying new things. Always use lineart? Try to paint, and vice versa. Hate doing backgrounds? Do them! Don't be afraid of failing, because you likely will, and that is okay. Everything doesn't have to be perfect, and the only way to master something is to practise. I'm sure you all have heard this before so I'm just gonna stop there.

Don't compare yourself to others. This, I feel, is an important thing. Or rather, don't compare yourself and say "I will never be this good". Why wouldn't you? (Don't talk to me about "talent" I will frown at you). In a way, comparing can be a very motivating thing, but at the same time, it can also be really bad for your confidence. Focus on improving yourself.

I could ramble on, but I won't, if you want to know something specific that you feel I might know, feel free to ask.




OrinocoFlow's picture

Great advice I live by a few

Great advice Laughing out loud I live by a few of those myself :3
took me a while to get past the "don't compare yourself" stage. I have been referencing real deer as of late but I have to ask...I'm at a sort of block where I feel that using the references makes it stiff but going without makes it inaccurate. Any idea how to fix that perhaps ^^;
You do not have a soul. You ARE a soul. You have a body.
~ C.S. Lewis
Starling's picture

Yay! Thank-you, will be

Yay! Thank-you, will be helpful. I guess I'll track this <3
Apeldille's picture

Orinoco: Hm, difficult

Orinoco: Hm, difficult question. I'm not sure, actually -- now I don't know how you usually do things, but perhaps look at many different ref pics, not just one? Could also look at other pictures and try to analyze what makes them feel not stiff/alive. The character's weight and motion, composition, etc. And don't blindly follow a reference; look at it, change things where you feel it's needed, etc.

Hopefully this was somewhat helpful... Motion/aliveness can be difficult! Maybe see if you can find deer/your motif in real life somewhere and do some quick studies to just capture motion and weight. Or watch a video or something.


Starling: I hope so :>

Keyblade's picture

This is a wonderful idea~

This is a wonderful idea~
Tracking and I will definitely come to you with any questions. ;w;
Amazegenalo's picture

~track of interest~

~track of interest~

B) /cackle I shall live here

B)
/cackle

I shall live here forever.
OrinocoFlow's picture

That is a good idea thanks

That is a good idea thanks :3
and I like the idea of sketching from life or videos and only focus on the energy and weight. I'll give that a shot thank you Laughing out loud
it did help :3
You do not have a soul. You ARE a soul. You have a body.
~ C.S. Lewis
SoliloquyChryseis's picture

Tracking because you're art

Tracking because you're art is awesome and I could probably use help here and there. ;D
Aivilo's picture

Pandora wrote:I shall live

Pandora wrote:
I shall live here forever.

^This!
Track :3
lemon's picture

"I will frown at

"I will frown at you"
Ahahaha!

Tracking. :3
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Poppyflower's picture

This is great (: I`m

This is great (:

I`m finally starting to post pictures up here. This is going to be really helpful. Thank you <3
~Poppy~
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Apeldille's picture

I'm glad there is some

I'm glad there is some interest, thanks for the tracks!


Sighthoundlady's picture

*sets up camp*

*sets up camp*
Aranyani's picture

Well that's a great idea.

Well that's a great idea.
-formerly Silensia-

oh wow track!

oh wow track!

Ooh! I'd love to take you up

Ooh! I'd love to take you up on the offer of redlining sometime, maybe some design advice as well..
Hadou's picture

hey there c: I corrected the

hey there c:
I corrected the legs on the deer sketch I made, and you critiqued a while ago,
edited version .3.
do ya think it looks any better?
Apeldille's picture

hi! yes, I think it does, the

hi! yes, I think it does, the back legs look much better now!

If you want, you perhaps could try to bend/show the joints in the front legs too, to make the pose more natural - they feel a tad stiff right now, especially if you are going for a jumping/leaping pose. A quick example of what I mean.





stalks

stalks
Mizkittenz's picture

Track!

Track!

tracking for my own good. >.<

tracking for my own good. >.<

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

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Trackinggg. (8

Trackinggg. (8